My poem, wat do you think?

"She needs to remind herself that life isn't quite that bad" ... notiice u said "that" twice. Try changing it to.. " she needs to remind herself that life isn't quite SO bad" ahaha get it?(: ... mabey next time tru making it more humble, to the point where the poem kinda paints a picture in your mind and touches your heart... but other that that, I was a pretty good poem! :D I'm a poet, so just givin honest advice. Hope I helped